So, I’m experimeting with a new structure for poetry, to express contrast in the same poem, by juxtaposing two complete poems into a single poem 🙂 Crazy right?
We could call it Lego poetry …or nyonglema poetry (not too conceited is the bard hey?)
I attempt here to contrast what we spend on food vs what we spend on wars, then complain that there’s famine on parts of the globe.
Well, my first attempt wasn’t too successful; only the beginning was okish…so here goes the okish part of my lego poem
How much should we spend on food For soldiers Rather than myriad weapons To kill humanity?
And this is the full version:
How much should we spend on food For soldiers Rather than myriad weapons To kill humanity? Blood fills the land where all it takes is a Little water to kill Little greed and ill- uminate green which will breed new harbours For humanity to be filled with the stuff that Heals, not which kills everything down to dust. (c) Nyonglema
I’d like to know what you think of this new form and any links to your blogs if you attempt something in this form. I find it rather complex because each poem should be independent, and put together they should still make sense….complex huh? But it’s fun working with strict forms sometimes….it’s like a painting. Do you think the contrast adds to the meaning? Please comment below…